Lol! I'm doing it now. Like the scaredy cat I am, I've been putting off re-reading this next chapter because I was dreading hating it and having to re-write it. BUT...BUT...I just read it and it's okay. It's not good, and it's still my crappy porn, BUT it does exactly what I wanted it to do...and I can only hope people get why this chapter has to happen and get the character dynamics in it.
I changed a bit in the next chapter too...and I think I've gone to far with it. *Shrugs* I'll deal with that clusterfuck once I've gotten this clusterfuck out of the way! :-D :-D :-D
Still big-banging? (Lol, that sounds very amusing to my pervy brain!)
Oh Baby, I promise you you do not porn bad!! Believe me! It always feels awkward when you're writing it so do not fret! Happy to be a second pair of eyes if you need them (I'll just keep saying it :) One day, one day)
Gone too far! O_o You change that back immediately!!! You keep saying it and I swear you have not. This is not as nasty as you think, Hun, honest. Also, we all kinda like nasty : ) embrace it.
Big-banging! Hahaha! nearly sprayed couscous everywhere! Two chapters to go. I thought of an additional storyline in the shower that could maybe wrap it up tighter but I'm so fucking sick of the thing I can't face writing another 20K : ( Maybe next month I'll see when I've had a break x
Well, it is kind of nasty. It's actually not written as kink, even though it is a kink, is that makes sense...so I'm hoping no one's squicked by it coz it's supposed to be awful, you know. Anyway, as I say, that's a problem to worry about another day! Lol!
Wow, god, another 20,000 is a lot. I'm sure both endings are awesome! As you say, leave it for a bit, and have a think. Don't get over-bigbanged! (AGAIN, HAHAHAHAHA!!)
"Jensen reached up to remove his tie but Jared grabbed his wrists, sliding his mouth away from Jensen’s lips to his ear and rasped “Leave it on” making Jensen shudder, grab at Jared’s head, cupping his jaw harshly and dragging him back into a kiss"
Fuck, is this from your BB???? Goddamn, all this teasing! It's not fair!!!
And the tie one is over at my beta, but I don't want to pressure her, she has more important things to do and to write right now (you know, Beware, for example)! :)
Oh god, WHY!!!! *sniffs* guess I'll have to get back to writing then.
Do you fancy giving my first draft a read through to see if it makes sense? It'll be a little rough around the edges, I just know there'll be unanswered questions and plot holes…x
I've got two more chapters to do and then a little tidying up…might be ready in a few days and be around 50k : / …does that sound okay? It would be amazing if you could x
Uuh, nope! I actually had to think for a second, making really sure. But I've got nothing. Mmh, there is only one thing I don't like to read but you can probably guess that. I know, I know but I just like the moose to top!
"He made to move and try to free himself from his pants which were still bunched around his lower legs but Jared crowded over him and whispered low in his ear “I said, leave it on” and then pushed his cock inside him in one smooth motion"
No really, there's almost no porn, just angst and more angst and a slightly confusing plot. Although I just wrote something that's not porn but made me get slightly warm *fans self* x
Yes! Beware trumps everything! No fretting! Just writing lovely creepy Jared! although did you read homopinks new one! Sam is so creepy in it I was squeeing like a mad woman! x
Lol...I did just sneak a little look and. It. Looks. Awesome. And yes, that is creepier than mine! Lol! It looks amazing though...
I am wondering though, as I look at this chapter, how I manage to write schmoopy non-con...coz it is TOTAL non-con but TOTAL schmoop at the same time! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!!? Lol!
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Date: 2014-03-22 09:59 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:32 pm (UTC)I changed a bit in the next chapter too...and I think I've gone to far with it. *Shrugs* I'll deal with that clusterfuck once I've gotten this clusterfuck out of the way! :-D :-D :-D
Still big-banging? (Lol, that sounds very amusing to my pervy brain!)
xx
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:41 pm (UTC)Gone too far! O_o You change that back immediately!!! You keep saying it and I swear you have not. This is not as nasty as you think, Hun, honest. Also, we all kinda like nasty : ) embrace it.
Big-banging! Hahaha! nearly sprayed couscous everywhere! Two chapters to go. I thought of an additional storyline in the shower that could maybe wrap it up tighter but I'm so fucking sick of the thing I can't face writing another 20K : ( Maybe next month I'll see when I've had a break x
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:58 pm (UTC)Wow, god, another 20,000 is a lot. I'm sure both endings are awesome! As you say, leave it for a bit, and have a think. Don't get over-bigbanged! (AGAIN, HAHAHAHAHA!!)
xx
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Date: 2014-03-22 11:10 am (UTC)I may have written tie!kink into my BB : ) x
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Date: 2014-03-22 11:13 am (UTC)TIE!KINK!!!! Was that a hint :P
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Date: 2014-03-22 11:18 am (UTC)"Jensen reached up to remove his tie but Jared grabbed his wrists, sliding his mouth away from Jensen’s lips to his ear and rasped “Leave it on” making Jensen shudder, grab at Jared’s head, cupping his jaw harshly and dragging him back into a kiss"
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Date: 2014-03-22 11:23 am (UTC)And the tie one is over at my beta, but I don't want to pressure her, she has more important things to do and to write right now (you know, Beware, for example)! :)
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:03 pm (UTC)Do you fancy giving my first draft a read through to see if it makes sense? It'll be a little rough around the edges, I just know there'll be unanswered questions and plot holes…x
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:30 pm (UTC)"He made to move and try to free himself from his pants which were still bunched around his lower legs but Jared crowded over him and whispered low in his ear “I said, leave it on” and then pushed his cock inside him in one smooth motion"
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:44 pm (UTC)No really, there's almost no porn, just angst and more angst and a slightly confusing plot. Although I just wrote something that's not porn but made me get slightly warm *fans self* x
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:36 pm (UTC)Write your things first. I want to read the new chapter of Beware, too, after all :D
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:42 pm (UTC)xx
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Date: 2014-03-22 12:46 pm (UTC)although did you read homopinks new one! Sam is so creepy in it I was squeeing like a mad woman! x
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Date: 2014-03-22 01:00 pm (UTC)xx
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Date: 2014-03-22 01:10 pm (UTC)It's only wee. Go look it and then tell me yours is more fucked up, I dare you x
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Date: 2014-03-22 01:17 pm (UTC)I am wondering though, as I look at this chapter, how I manage to write schmoopy non-con...coz it is TOTAL non-con but TOTAL schmoop at the same time! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!!? Lol!
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Date: 2014-03-22 01:39 pm (UTC)I'm in the park. It's cold x
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Date: 2014-03-22 01:42 pm (UTC)Lol, hopefully, it comes out okay! :-D
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